New script idea

So while I was redoing my second story board for the old idea I wasn't overly happy with and so decide to start again.  I don't usual do that as when I've got an idea that is it and I'm sicking to it.  But there was a lot of animation need for that and I want to get this finish for the competition died line.

So I've decided that a rewrite was what was needed.  So here it is the lonely sheep Brian who wants to inspire other sheep to be more individual.

A lonely sheep

There is a field of sheep heading towards a hill.  There are some lamb playing in the field.  There some more sheep to the left sitting under a tree to shading themselves.  To the right there is more sheep eating the grass

There are some lames running around playing shouting

WIDE: camera move in from a long wide angle toward a small hill

ZOOM IN: camera zoom in on the hill

Playing lamb

Ha raa ha raa

A bright light flashes as a figure jumps from behind the hill landing on top of the hill in a dramatic and spectacular form.  It is Brian who lands on top of the hill where brain then addresses the crowd.

CLOSE UP: Camera tracks Brian flying through the sky

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Camera centres on Brian the sheep standing on the hill. 

BRIAN THE SHEEP

Good morning

The crowd addresses Brian

WIDE: Camera has now moved back looking from the angle  of the tree towards the hill.

sheep Crowd                   

Ha raa HA raa, bless him bless him

BRIAN THE SHEEP

Please, please

Brian try to calm the crowd down while getting their attention.

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd

BRIAN THE SHEEP

Please listen.  I've got one or two thing to say.

The crowd respond to Brian

WIDE: camera looking toward Brian from the other side

SHEEP CROWD

Tell us, tell all of them

Brian continues to talk with the crowd.

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd

BRIAN THE SHEEP

Look you've got it all wrong

Brian briefly purses.  The sheep crowd look bewilder yet continue to eat there grass.

WIDE: look toward the crowd

BRIAN THE SHEEP

You don't need to follow me, you don't need to follow anybody

Brian continues to talk with the crowd.

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd

BRIAN THE SHEEP

Your all individuals

The crowd respond to Brian

WIDE: Camera has now moved back looking from the angle of the tree towards the hill.

SHEEP CROWD

Yes were all individuals

Brian and the crowd continues to addresses each other.

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd

BRIAN THE SHEEP

Your all different

WIDE: camera looking toward Brian from the other side

SHEEP CROWD

Yes we are all different

A wolf disguise as a sheep responds to Brian but is shhed by another sheep unaware that he is a wolf

WIDE: camera looking toward Brian from the other side

WOLF

I'm not

SHEEP CROWD

Shh

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd

BRIAN THE SHEEP

You all got to work it out for yourselves

WIDE: Camera has now moved back looking from the angle  of the tree towards the hill.

SHEEP CROWD

Yes we've got to work it out for ourselves

BRIAN THE SHEEP

Exactly

WIDE: look toward the crowd

SHEEP CROWD

Tell us more

Brian start to become very frustrated with the crowd shaking his from side ti side.

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd

BRIAN THE SHEEP

NO.  That's the point don't let anyone tell you what to do

Brian shakes his head from side to side.  The crowd continues to eat away at the grass.

CUTAWAY: camera moves back as the crowd continues to eat away.

The End.

possible cool look for Brian

references for sheep crowd designs

These two lower images are what I’m thinking about a wolf in disguise try to look like sheep.  I know that it's a sheep wearing a wolf but just image it's the other way round.  The bottom image a got a cheeky look, I like that