So while I was redoing my second story board for the old idea I wasn't overly happy with and so decide to start again. I don't usual do that as when I've got an idea that is it and I'm sicking to it. But there was a lot of animation need for that and I want to get this finish for the competition died line.
So I've decided that a rewrite was what was needed. So here it is the lonely sheep Brian who wants to inspire other sheep to be more individual.
A lonely sheep
There is a field of sheep heading towards a hill. There
are some lamb playing in the field. There some more sheep to the left
sitting under a tree to shading themselves. To the right there is more
sheep eating the grass
There are some lames running around playing shouting
WIDE: camera move in from a long wide angle toward a small hill
ZOOM IN: camera zoom in on the hill
Playing lamb
Ha raa ha raa
A bright light flashes as a figure jumps from behind the hill
landing on top of the hill in a dramatic and spectacular form. It is
Brian who lands on top of the hill where brain then addresses the crowd.
CLOSE UP: Camera tracks Brian flying through the sky
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Camera centres on Brian the sheep standing on
the hill.
BRIAN THE SHEEP
Good morning
The crowd addresses Brian
WIDE: Camera has now moved back looking from the angle of
the tree towards the hill.
sheep Crowd
Ha raa HA raa, bless him bless him
BRIAN THE SHEEP
Please, please
Brian try to calm the crowd down while getting their attention.
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd
BRIAN THE SHEEP
Please listen. I've got one or
two thing to say.
The crowd respond to Brian
WIDE: camera looking toward Brian from the other side
SHEEP CROWD
Tell us, tell all of them
Brian continues to talk with the crowd.
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd
BRIAN THE SHEEP
Look you've got it all wrong
Brian briefly purses. The sheep crowd look bewilder yet
continue to eat there grass.
WIDE: look toward the crowd
BRIAN THE SHEEP
You don't need to follow me, you don't
need to follow anybody
Brian continues to talk with the crowd.
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd
BRIAN THE SHEEP
Your all individuals
The crowd respond to Brian
WIDE: Camera has now moved back looking from the angle of
the tree towards the hill.
SHEEP CROWD
Yes were all individuals
Brian and the crowd continues to addresses each other.
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd
BRIAN THE SHEEP
Your all different
WIDE: camera looking toward Brian from the other side
SHEEP CROWD
Yes we are all different
A wolf disguise as a sheep responds to Brian but is shhed by
another sheep unaware that he is a wolf
WIDE: camera looking toward Brian from the other side
WOLF
I'm not
SHEEP CROWD
Shh
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd
BRIAN THE SHEEP
You all got to work it out for
yourselves
WIDE: Camera has now moved back looking from the angle of
the tree towards the hill.
SHEEP CROWD
Yes we've got to work it out for
ourselves
BRIAN THE SHEEP
Exactly
WIDE: look toward the crowd
SHEEP CROWD
Tell us more
Brian start to become very frustrated with the crowd shaking
his from side ti side.
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: Brian facing the crowd
BRIAN THE SHEEP
NO. That's the point don't let
anyone tell you what to do
Brian shakes his head from side to side. The crowd continues
to eat away at the grass.
CUTAWAY: camera moves back as the crowd continues to eat away.
The End.
possible cool look for Brian
references
for sheep crowd designs
These two lower images are what I’m
thinking about a wolf in disguise try to look like sheep. I know that it's a sheep wearing a wolf but just image it's the other way round. The bottom image a got a cheeky look, I like that